Tuesday, November 14, 2006

Success Story?

Dear EE:

Thanks very much for critiquing my query letter
a couple of weeks ago. I revised it, in line with your suggestions, and sent it to several agents. I’ve received requests for two partials so far. I appreciate the time you take to help writers.

Every time I receive a comment like this the minions ask to see the revised version. Since you were kind enough to include it, I've posted it in the comments of Face-Lift 226 .


Anonymous said...

Hurrah! Congratulations, and good luck with the next stage!

And that rewritten query letter was really quite awesome; I'm not surprised you're getting interest with it. :-)

kiss-me-at-the-gate said...

Congratulations! Here's hoping you get two requests for fulls from those two agents soon!

Dave Fragments said...

The revised version works well. It has tension and drama and pulls the reader to the story. Good work and I'm glad you're getting requests.

Nancy Beck said...

How awesome is that? Congrats, author!


Anonymous said...

That's a terrific rewrite -- so much clearer. Good luck. It becomes more, not less, intriguing with the mist cleared away.