The task was to write a dialogue scene using any or all of six provided photographs. I chose the submission below to display with speech bubbles. The other two submissions are in the comments. This one is by Whirlochre:
Other submissions (Note that the photos and speakers were allowed to be in any order).
By K.M. Walton:
3 = She says, “A Thai love potion? Brilliant. You are a wickedly brilliant woman.”
Mindy says, “It’ll take five minutes and then it’s a go.
She says, “Five? That seems risky.”
Mindy says, “Ten million dollars risky.”
2 = She says, “I can’t think without my coffee. Mr. G…NG…would like me to grab you gentlemen a cup?”
6 = G says, “Why are you smiling like a mental patient? What the hell is the matter with you?”
NG says, “I…feeelll…good.”
She smiles.
1 = NG says, “You smell like springtime.” She says, “I just need you to sign…right here.”
4 = She says, “Hurry up, sexy.” NG says, “I see two of you…and my…stomach hurts.”
5 = She says, “You don’t feel sick do you? NG just puked on my shoes.” G says, “Actually, I feel like ten million bucks.”
By Bevie:
6. she: Sales is a tough business. These guys aren’t sure they want to buy my companies’ software. I know how to seal the deal.
2. he-ng: It looks very nice, Ms. Donata.
she: call me Charity.
he-ng: Very well. It looks very nice, Charity. But I’m not sure it meets our company’s needs.
he-g: You see, it’s a question of cost versus reward. Edward and I need software which will meet our diverse needs. I’m not sure your product does this.
she: Well, perhaps if I met with each of you alone. You could show me what you need.
4. he-ng: So, Charity, as you can see, I’m mainly responsible for outflow.
she: So I see. Where did you get this tie?
he-ng: What? Oh. It was a gift. You like it?
she: Oh, yes. I like men with long – ties. You know?
he-ng: Yes. I think I’m beginning to understand.
she: And I see you like the feel of nylon.
5. he-g: So, do you think you can meet my needs?
she: I’m sure of it. My, what a long tie you have.
he-g: You like long things?
she: Yes. But not when they’re – limp. You know?
he-g: I believe I do. No call for worries about that, Charity. And now that you know my needs, perhaps I can see what you have to offer?
she: You read my mind.
3. she: Hello? Sally? I got the deal. No. No problem at all. Well, it was a bit hard. But only for a while. You got my assignment sheet? Good. Where am I off to next? Santa Clara’s Detention Center for Women? Oh, this is going to be fun.
3 comments:
Other submissions (Note that the photos and speakers were allowed to be in any order).
By K.M. Walton:
3 =
She says, “A Thai love potion? Brilliant. You are a wickedly brilliant woman.”
Mindy says, “It’ll take five minutes and then it’s a go.
She says, “Five? That seems risky.”
Mindy says, “Ten million dollars risky.”
2 =
She says, “I can’t think without my coffee. Mr. G…NG…would like me to grab you gentlemen a cup?”
6 =
G says, “Why are you smiling like a mental patient? What the hell is the matter with you?”
NG says, “I…feeelll…good.”
She smiles.
1 =
NG says, “You smell like springtime.”
She says, “I just need you to sign…right here.”
4 =
She says, “Hurry up, sexy.”
NG says, “I see two of you…and my…stomach hurts.”
5 =
She says, “You don’t feel sick do you? NG just puked on my shoes.”
G says, “Actually, I feel like ten million bucks.”
By Bevie:
6.
she: Sales is a tough business. These guys aren’t sure they want to buy my companies’ software. I know how to seal the deal.
2.
he-ng: It looks very nice, Ms. Donata.
she: call me Charity.
he-ng: Very well. It looks very nice, Charity. But I’m not sure it meets our company’s needs.
he-g: You see, it’s a question of cost versus reward. Edward and I need software which will meet our diverse needs. I’m not sure your product does this.
she: Well, perhaps if I met with each of you alone. You could show me what you need.
4.
he-ng: So, Charity, as you can see, I’m mainly responsible for outflow.
she: So I see. Where did you get this tie?
he-ng: What? Oh. It was a gift. You like it?
she: Oh, yes. I like men with long – ties. You know?
he-ng: Yes. I think I’m beginning to understand.
she: And I see you like the feel of nylon.
5.
he-g: So, do you think you can meet my needs?
she: I’m sure of it. My, what a long tie you have.
he-g: You like long things?
she: Yes. But not when they’re – limp. You know?
he-g: I believe I do. No call for worries about that, Charity. And now that you know my needs, perhaps I can see what you have to offer?
she: You read my mind.
3.
she: Hello? Sally? I got the deal. No. No problem at all. Well, it was a bit hard. But only for a while. You got my assignment sheet? Good. Where am I off to next? Santa Clara’s Detention Center for Women? Oh, this is going to be fun.
That was good. No shit.
*ROTF*
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