The task was to write a dialogue scene using any or all of six provided photographs. I chose the submission below to display with speech bubbles. The other two submissions are in the comments. This one is by Whirlochre:
Other submissions (Note that the photos and speakers were allowed to be in any order).
By K.M. Walton:
3 = She says, “A Thai love potion? Brilliant. You are a wickedly brilliant woman.”
Mindy says, “It’ll take five minutes and then it’s a go.
She says, “Five? That seems risky.”
Mindy says, “Ten million dollars risky.”
2 = She says, “I can’t think without my coffee. Mr. G…NG…would like me to grab you gentlemen a cup?”
6 = G says, “Why are you smiling like a mental patient? What the hell is the matter with you?”
NG says, “I…feeelll…good.”
She smiles.
1 = NG says, “You smell like springtime.” She says, “I just need you to sign…right here.”
4 = She says, “Hurry up, sexy.” NG says, “I see two of you…and my…stomach hurts.”
5 = She says, “You don’t feel sick do you? NG just puked on my shoes.” G says, “Actually, I feel like ten million bucks.”
By Bevie:
6. she: Sales is a tough business. These guys aren’t sure they want to buy my companies’ software. I know how to seal the deal.
2. he-ng: It looks very nice, Ms. Donata.
she: call me Charity.
he-ng: Very well. It looks very nice, Charity. But I’m not sure it meets our company’s needs.
he-g: You see, it’s a question of cost versus reward. Edward and I need software which will meet our diverse needs. I’m not sure your product does this.
she: Well, perhaps if I met with each of you alone. You could show me what you need.
4. he-ng: So, Charity, as you can see, I’m mainly responsible for outflow.
she: So I see. Where did you get this tie?
he-ng: What? Oh. It was a gift. You like it?
she: Oh, yes. I like men with long – ties. You know?
he-ng: Yes. I think I’m beginning to understand.
she: And I see you like the feel of nylon.
5. he-g: So, do you think you can meet my needs?
she: I’m sure of it. My, what a long tie you have.
he-g: You like long things?
she: Yes. But not when they’re – limp. You know?
he-g: I believe I do. No call for worries about that, Charity. And now that you know my needs, perhaps I can see what you have to offer?
she: You read my mind.
3. she: Hello? Sally? I got the deal. No. No problem at all. Well, it was a bit hard. But only for a while. You got my assignment sheet? Good. Where am I off to next? Santa Clara’s Detention Center for Women? Oh, this is going to be fun.
Other submissions (Note that the photos and speakers were allowed to be in any order).
ReplyDeleteBy K.M. Walton:
3 =
She says, “A Thai love potion? Brilliant. You are a wickedly brilliant woman.”
Mindy says, “It’ll take five minutes and then it’s a go.
She says, “Five? That seems risky.”
Mindy says, “Ten million dollars risky.”
2 =
She says, “I can’t think without my coffee. Mr. G…NG…would like me to grab you gentlemen a cup?”
6 =
G says, “Why are you smiling like a mental patient? What the hell is the matter with you?”
NG says, “I…feeelll…good.”
She smiles.
1 =
NG says, “You smell like springtime.”
She says, “I just need you to sign…right here.”
4 =
She says, “Hurry up, sexy.”
NG says, “I see two of you…and my…stomach hurts.”
5 =
She says, “You don’t feel sick do you? NG just puked on my shoes.”
G says, “Actually, I feel like ten million bucks.”
By Bevie:
6.
she: Sales is a tough business. These guys aren’t sure they want to buy my companies’ software. I know how to seal the deal.
2.
he-ng: It looks very nice, Ms. Donata.
she: call me Charity.
he-ng: Very well. It looks very nice, Charity. But I’m not sure it meets our company’s needs.
he-g: You see, it’s a question of cost versus reward. Edward and I need software which will meet our diverse needs. I’m not sure your product does this.
she: Well, perhaps if I met with each of you alone. You could show me what you need.
4.
he-ng: So, Charity, as you can see, I’m mainly responsible for outflow.
she: So I see. Where did you get this tie?
he-ng: What? Oh. It was a gift. You like it?
she: Oh, yes. I like men with long – ties. You know?
he-ng: Yes. I think I’m beginning to understand.
she: And I see you like the feel of nylon.
5.
he-g: So, do you think you can meet my needs?
she: I’m sure of it. My, what a long tie you have.
he-g: You like long things?
she: Yes. But not when they’re – limp. You know?
he-g: I believe I do. No call for worries about that, Charity. And now that you know my needs, perhaps I can see what you have to offer?
she: You read my mind.
3.
she: Hello? Sally? I got the deal. No. No problem at all. Well, it was a bit hard. But only for a while. You got my assignment sheet? Good. Where am I off to next? Santa Clara’s Detention Center for Women? Oh, this is going to be fun.
That was good. No shit.
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