tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post4199337083929175352..comments2024-03-26T18:28:06.391-04:00Comments on Evil Editor: Face-Lift 574Evil Editorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03879826770199639420noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-50009132150008601782008-10-15T07:26:00.000-04:002008-10-15T07:26:00.000-04:00If they shoot this wife, what's to stop the brothe...If they shoot this wife, what's to stop the brother hooking up with someone just as bad? or worse? How does killing her solve the fundamental problem of the brother's too-trustingness?nonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00415222406280230021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-72229092212016295642008-10-15T07:17:00.000-04:002008-10-15T07:17:00.000-04:00Ditto, this seems like it could be a real hoot. I ...Ditto, this seems like it could be a real hoot. I hope it is indeed funny. :-)Staciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07969399927758009095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-43727236412312516892008-10-14T19:28:00.000-04:002008-10-14T19:28:00.000-04:00Agreement! This has a very fun tone and the plot i...Agreement! This has a very fun tone and the plot is wicked good too! Take EE's advice and note that your query falls just below not one, but two, "success story" entries. Good Luck!<BR/><BR/>MeriAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-5333208908857271982008-10-14T16:59:00.000-04:002008-10-14T16:59:00.000-04:00A mom who's dying and seems to be off her rocker d...A mom who's dying and seems to be off her rocker decides, in her final act, to kill the shrewish wife of her grown Fetal Alcohol Syndrome son and enlists the help of her seemingly sane daughter. <BR/><BR/>I sure hope this is a comedy. <BR/><BR/>What's the daughter's motivation?EBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14361825595951678685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-40783797802129357792008-10-14T15:17:00.000-04:002008-10-14T15:17:00.000-04:00Replace the middle paragraph with EE's and I'd say...Replace the middle paragraph with EE's and I'd say you're good to go. Unless, of course, this is meant to be serious. It doesn't seem like that to me though with the title and how the query is worded.<BR/><BR/>Sounds like quite the romp and a fun read. Your voice is coming through the query. Good job overall.Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.com