tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post1712609601208474255..comments2024-03-26T18:28:06.391-04:00Comments on Evil Editor: Face-Lift 1304Evil Editorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03879826770199639420noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-56702004227177457042016-03-10T22:19:17.873-05:002016-03-10T22:19:17.873-05:00When I saw the title, I thought that it was a joke...When I saw the title, I thought that it was a joke; and not a good one, either. "Eric and the Wind Child" will do fine, without the sniggering and laughter that gets it left on the shelf.khazar-khumnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-14998679402733068522016-03-08T21:48:06.186-05:002016-03-08T21:48:06.186-05:00What's an Aura? Who's the boy the Wind Chi...What's an Aura? Who's the boy the Wind Child wants to kill? Or just choke? How would the Aura help him choke the boy? <br /><br />This actually explains a lot about 12 year old boys. I had no idea.<br /><br />I forgot about Aquaman. Thanks!<br /><br />Next up: Aquaman VS Medusa the lesbian doctor with temperamental snake hair? I'm ringside for that one. Medusa is gonna throw a fit.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-38985594120526965742016-03-08T16:27:20.206-05:002016-03-08T16:27:20.206-05:00It seems as if you're trying too hard to get e...It seems as if you're trying too hard to get every detail of the plot into the query.<br /><br />Instead, focus on your main character. What problem does he face, and what must he do to overcome it?<br /><br />Write a sentence, no more than 20 words in length, telling what happens in the book. Base your query on that sentence.<br /><br />Try to avoid naming more than two or, at most, three characters in the query. If that means leaving out the sister or the various other characters entirely, so be it.<br />AlaskaRavenclawnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-30118736080547994152016-03-08T15:24:54.637-05:002016-03-08T15:24:54.637-05:00Congratulations on having a comprehensible set of ...Congratulations on having a comprehensible set of events strung together. On the minus side, it looks a bit like an and plot (and then this happens, and the that happens, and then the other happens). What does all of this happening mean to Eric and what he really wants?<br /><br />It would help to list what kind of powers Eric has/is developing and what his plan is for rescuing his sister other than learning to control said powers. Also, what kind of danger is she in?<br /><br />As a slightly different way of looking at things:<br /><br />Who's the MC? Eric Ortega<br />What is the story worthy problem that gets solved? Stopping Nikias? Saving his sister? All the stuff that happens adds up to what exactly?<br />What are the obstacles to the above?<br />What's the plan to resolve those obstacles?<br /><br />Hope this helps. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com