tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post116593529579997284..comments2024-03-26T18:28:06.391-04:00Comments on Evil Editor: Miss Pettipants Mystery 2Evil Editorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03879826770199639420noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1166009406480225682006-12-13T06:30:00.000-05:002006-12-13T06:30:00.000-05:00These are just too clever for me. I'm terrified t...These are just too clever for me. I'm terrified to submit anything!<BR/><BR/>Good job for both start and finish. I don't believe I dare comment further, lol. I might be up for PUNishment should I do so.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1165984441005399052006-12-12T23:34:00.000-05:002006-12-12T23:34:00.000-05:00Depends where you are, but yes: in southern and so...Depends where you are, but yes: in southern and southwest England the first frost can come in late November or even late December, if it wants to...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1165984036868852062006-12-12T23:27:00.000-05:002006-12-12T23:27:00.000-05:00Maybe the first frost is later in England?Maybe the first frost is later in England?HawkOwlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08506953701159624542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1165983227255787182006-12-12T23:13:00.000-05:002006-12-12T23:13:00.000-05:00I hate to say this, but that picture of the butler...I hate to say this, but that picture of the butler is truly offensive. <BR/>He looks like he's wearing earings (little ones that dangle a teeny bit) and reminds me of my second wife who I nicknamed Joan of Arc because she burned cats at the stake. I think that bulter is a crossdresser, too.Dave Fragmentshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17985158361431606939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1165977460633850012006-12-12T21:37:00.000-05:002006-12-12T21:37:00.000-05:00This was my favourite opening. I loved the way it ...This was my favourite opening. I loved the way it was put together - like newlyweds on a waterbed.McKoalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01457446171624585099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1165973581587818642006-12-12T20:33:00.000-05:002006-12-12T20:33:00.000-05:00Holy shit that was great! The opening was an excel...Holy shit that was great! The opening was an excellent set-up, and the conclusion was very creative. Nice job, ril and Anonymous. "pumping like newlyweds" LOL I wish I could claim that line, and I hope you're not offended if I accidentally use it sometime ;-)Wonderwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13118126631519254865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1165967504113031872006-12-12T18:51:00.000-05:002006-12-12T18:51:00.000-05:00I love the first two paragraphs of the opening. An...I love the first two paragraphs of the opening. And I agree with Hawkowl that the similes are fabulous and fitting. Ril, great job.<BR/><BR/>But all in all, as a whole, this Pettipants mystery isn't as charming as the first. I didn't like flatulent and vinyl. The vicar was too organized if he had rehearsals for a nativity play before the first frost (imho). And the solution is so-so. <BR/><BR/>I do like Amelia (Miss Marple re-incarnated) and want to see more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1165962114446175212006-12-12T17:28:00.000-05:002006-12-12T17:28:00.000-05:00You slay me, authors.You slay me, authors.kiss-me-at-the-gatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18289100980388975854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1165956897227585922006-12-12T15:54:00.000-05:002006-12-12T15:54:00.000-05:00"Within minutes, Constable Hardbottom went flashin..."Within minutes, Constable Hardbottom went flashing by on his bicycle, <I>his legs pumping like newlyweds</I>."<BR/><BR/>Oh tee-hee. Well done.roachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10876796823777689012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1165949463143541782006-12-12T13:51:00.000-05:002006-12-12T13:51:00.000-05:00Make that "ever seen", not "ever since."Make that "ever <EM>seen</EM>", not "ever since."HawkOwlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08506953701159624542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1165949424607005482006-12-12T13:50:00.000-05:002006-12-12T13:50:00.000-05:00I think the opening has the best use of similes ev...I think the opening has the best use of similes ever since on Evil Editor.HawkOwlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08506953701159624542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1165949013106887062006-12-12T13:43:00.000-05:002006-12-12T13:43:00.000-05:00And that's a delicious last line...And that's a delicious last line...Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1165948509574524492006-12-12T13:35:00.000-05:002006-12-12T13:35:00.000-05:00I think I'm dying of puns, too many puns... I swoo...I think I'm dying of puns, too many puns... I swoon, I swoon... Fugitive, vaporous emissions haunt me...Dave Fragmentshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17985158361431606939noreply@blogger.com