tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post718063624983659715..comments2024-03-18T13:32:44.865-04:00Comments on Evil Editor: Face-Lift 1242Evil Editorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03879826770199639420noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-5084075860162156672014-12-10T14:24:25.544-05:002014-12-10T14:24:25.544-05:00if Becca still has nagging doubts about whether he...if Becca still has nagging doubts about whether her teacher is reall a vampire or he's merely a weird guy and isn't sure if vampires are even real, why has she told her friends that their teacher migh be a vampire? <br /><br />Add in some of the evidence that Becca finds and some kind of ticking clock that makes killing the vampire ASAP necessary. You mention the possibility of a big vampire attack at the Halloween dance, but I don't know why Becca thinks that might happen.InkAndPixelClubhttp://ladiesofcomicazi.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-65385038434303577212014-12-10T11:06:34.113-05:002014-12-10T11:06:34.113-05:00Yeah, I think the query is fine, except for the (l...Yeah, I think the query is fine, except for the (lack of) credentials paragraph. Cut that.<br /><br />The story sounds more middle grade than YA, though.AlaskaRavenclawnoreply@blogger.com