tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post5835170430635061725..comments2024-03-26T18:28:06.391-04:00Comments on Evil Editor: New Beginning 1090Evil Editorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03879826770199639420noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-81648322687216479572020-08-18T02:14:23.821-04:002020-08-18T02:14:23.821-04:00Excellent point, thanks.
Great continuation.Excellent point, thanks. <br /><br />Great continuation.Wilkins MacQueenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09932779108429504166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-5360645392983702442020-08-17T09:18:34.503-04:002020-08-17T09:18:34.503-04:00I like this. I would like it more if it maintained...I like this. I would like it more if it maintained the present tense throughout. The past tense in paragraph 1 is necessary, as the orthodontist and dad stuff happened in the past, but from "I got up" to "I hugged her more" can all be present tense ("I think she thinks I'm" is a bit bothersome, but that can be changed to "She probably thinks I'm."<br /><br />Of course if you've written an entire novel in past tense, changing to present may be too much work or may be inappropriate for the whole book. But starting this passage in present, switching to past and finishing in present isn't working for me.Evil Editorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03879826770199639420noreply@blogger.com