tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post5336030299417947136..comments2024-03-26T18:28:06.391-04:00Comments on Evil Editor: Face-Lift 1142Evil Editorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03879826770199639420noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-44850696787523760902013-07-28T09:45:06.504-04:002013-07-28T09:45:06.504-04:00Presuming the reader gets to the execution.Presuming the reader gets to the execution.nonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00415222406280230021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-6274408661366497822013-07-26T09:48:59.045-04:002013-07-26T09:48:59.045-04:00Well-worn does not matter. It's all in the exe...Well-worn does not matter. It's all in the execution.AlaskaRavenclawnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-82617824371269753522013-07-25T22:24:06.132-04:002013-07-25T22:24:06.132-04:00Well, the Portuguese involvement in the slave trad...Well, the Portuguese involvement in the slave trade may be untrodden ground, but surely 'slave-owner learns better by being enslaved' is a pretty well-worn idea by now. They even inserted it into the plot of 'The Eagle', for reasons that will not become clear in this lifetime.<br /><br />Also, I don't buy it. I can believe Mbungu thinks it a dreadful thing for him to be a slave, and for his own warriors, but for his defeated enemies? Nah. Cognitive dissonance isn't overcome that easily.nonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00415222406280230021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-27702323699943057442013-07-25T18:34:46.407-04:002013-07-25T18:34:46.407-04:00Looks good and unique. I would make sure all your ...Looks good and unique. I would make sure all your historical facts are accurate before querying. It's easy to get lost in the story and not triple check everything.<br /><br />Best of luck!CavalierdeNuithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09862976676163347369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-54776796613244299982013-07-25T16:31:29.703-04:002013-07-25T16:31:29.703-04:00Hi author
Good one, I think. Can Will Smith star,...Hi author<br /><br />Good one, I think. Can Will Smith star, or is he too old? Just keep his son out of it and we're good.<br /><br />EE, at the time most ship crews were mixed. All anyone cared about was whether or not you'd do the work. Some pirate crews were almost completely made up of former slaves.<br /><br />I think you need to find a writer from the US who is willing to help you. Heck, you might even ask some of the minions here. They'd be able to help you smooth out any rough spots. khazar-khumnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-33663546624402610542013-07-25T14:28:18.042-04:002013-07-25T14:28:18.042-04:00"Advices" is a pretty clear indicator of..."Advices" is a pretty clear indicator of a proficient but non-native speaker. Seen it a million times. I'm guessing this is another Brazilian writer? <br /><br />Writer, you'll need to either collaborate with a native English speaker, or else stick to Portuguese. Yes, the US fiction market is much bigger than the Brazilian one, but it's also much too competitive to go into without native-like English proficiency. <br /><br />AlaskaRavenclawnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-58066046738122372432013-07-25T13:55:33.198-04:002013-07-25T13:55:33.198-04:00Wow. Well guess I better get back to work. Nothing...Wow. Well guess I better get back to work. Nothing to do here today.<br /><br />Best of luck author!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18159799725109784001noreply@blogger.com