tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post4652112864241742447..comments2024-03-26T18:28:06.391-04:00Comments on Evil Editor: Practice Query #1Evil Editorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03879826770199639420noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-88992534022805951512014-04-16T04:15:37.077-04:002014-04-16T04:15:37.077-04:00"Cyborg taxidermy"? I love it!"Cyborg taxidermy"? I love it!fairyhedgehoghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14141089706966852951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-20396958554669273162014-04-16T01:49:15.478-04:002014-04-16T01:49:15.478-04:00And to think, we could have had this instead of Ga...And to think, we could have had this instead of Game of Thrones...Whirlochrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09846196906206886945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-14972696914224797222014-04-15T14:12:51.196-04:002014-04-15T14:12:51.196-04:00KK, for amusement, it’s a 10. As a query, it has t...KK, for amusement, it’s a 10. As a query, it has too much set up. Do you really care?<br /><br />Maybe you should change the genre to Cyborg Eroticism and promise kinky sex between the cyborg harrow and a cyborg soda machine. The inciting incidence could be an erotic rape of Suzy Cola by Jean-Luc Zamboni. <br /><br />Or is it better as Harrow Fiction? Stephen King, eat your cyborg heart out.Mister Furkleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07156977719916770984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-87873890214413009942014-04-15T13:43:00.338-04:002014-04-15T13:43:00.338-04:00I think I'm in love with "Jean-Luc Zambon...I think I'm in love with "Jean-Luc Zamboni" . . .<br />You're my laugh of the day, today. <br />Good fun. Thanks. <i>(and let the rest figure it out) </i><br /><br />To be nerdy: <br />People who write queries (nearly all of us) should see that there's two setup paragraphs in this. That takes up precious words and a full paragraph. <br /><br />Dave Fragmentshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18217202416002233005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-10291274373815658952014-04-15T13:06:39.615-04:002014-04-15T13:06:39.615-04:00I would love to see this written, if not as a nove...I would love to see this written, if not as a novel, as a short story. Suzy Cola! dispensing her favors!<br />IMHOnoreply@blogger.com