tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post4370879052545071178..comments2024-03-26T18:28:06.391-04:00Comments on Evil Editor: Fake Query 6Evil Editorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03879826770199639420noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-32537566796202181922008-01-29T07:02:00.000-05:002008-01-29T07:02:00.000-05:00Good job. You have given the idea some real depth...Good job. You have given the idea some real depth. I think it would make a great book.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1966982552871306022008-01-27T23:36:00.000-05:002008-01-27T23:36:00.000-05:00Thanks!I was so happy to get this GTP. I wasn't a ...Thanks!<BR/>I was so happy to get this GTP. I wasn't a minion back then.<BR/>I might actually give this a try....Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794946908789120139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-54281439327085457652008-01-27T20:27:00.000-05:002008-01-27T20:27:00.000-05:00Although this did remind me a little of "Highlande...Although this did remind me a little of "Highlander", I really enjoyed the plot development as presented and this is another one I might try to match up the Fake #Fake progression.<BR/><BR/>"Trevor, on the other hand, received a variety of floral arrangements from Mrs. Herbert’s garden, a couple of Hail Mary’s, and a blanket of North Carolina’s finest soil."<BR/><BR/>That line got me in and kept me reading. I guess I am not paying attention because I just got that Trevor is "deed" not "dead"!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-12941421510460856292008-01-27T19:45:00.000-05:002008-01-27T19:45:00.000-05:00If Trevor was a jerk, but undergoes a real change ...If Trevor was a jerk, but undergoes a real change of heart as he sees the others kids' suffering, you could have a Middle Grade success.<BR/><BR/>Or not.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-7526064906363596462008-01-27T13:49:00.000-05:002008-01-27T13:49:00.000-05:00CL, I think if you and "Ghost Boy" Mckoala teamed ...CL, I think if you and "Ghost Boy" Mckoala teamed up on this one, you'd have a real, hands-down winner. I'll go pjd one better (hah, see if you cut MY character again, pjd) and say how much I loved paragraphs 1 AND 2.Phoenix Sullivanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03290349031002504007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-91555863641883194442008-01-27T13:32:00.000-05:002008-01-27T13:32:00.000-05:00This is another good one! You fleshed out the plot...This is another good one! You fleshed out the plot really nicely.Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-68846525610020147582008-01-27T12:47:00.000-05:002008-01-27T12:47:00.000-05:00Nice take on the fake plot, and I especially like ...Nice take on the fake plot, and I especially like the opening paragraph of the query.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-7561800619196826102008-01-27T12:30:00.000-05:002008-01-27T12:30:00.000-05:00Cool, CL. Write it!Cool, CL. Write it!Robin S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03258459688300851984noreply@blogger.com