tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post303892143925518305..comments2024-03-26T18:28:06.391-04:00Comments on Evil Editor: Fake Query 5 (How to Be Fabulous)Evil Editorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03879826770199639420noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-27588121681766632342008-02-17T20:50:00.000-05:002008-02-17T20:50:00.000-05:00Good job, Pete. Wait, I think I've seen "Space Vix...Good job, Pete. Wait, I think I've seen "Space Vixens from Planet Lesbos."Blogless Trollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03983848259551488867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-33394455920249473752008-02-17T16:43:00.000-05:002008-02-17T16:43:00.000-05:00Pete!! You said those videos were for your own per...Pete!! You said those videos were for your own personal use! I feel betrayed.<BR/><BR/>MEAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-72846463330899189292008-02-17T15:18:00.000-05:002008-02-17T15:18:00.000-05:00I bet you look fetching in those Lucite heels.I've...I bet you look fetching in those Lucite heels.<BR/><BR/>I've seen some of the "off the wall letters" agents get, and this sounds JUST like one! Absolutely believable.Brendahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17083327647412477394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-39477834346853887652008-02-17T14:35:00.000-05:002008-02-17T14:35:00.000-05:00Slight POV problem - some of the words have more t...Slight POV problem - some of the words have more than zero letters in them.<BR/><BR/>Good characterisation though - I'm guessing blonde, and capable of levitating 150 feet above the ground if inflated with the right gas.Whirlochrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09846196906206886945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-51003510726984597432008-02-17T14:28:00.000-05:002008-02-17T14:28:00.000-05:00Oh, Pete, this is hysterical.Is your wife kinds ne...Oh, Pete, this is hysterical.<BR/><BR/>Is your wife kinds nervous that you<BR/>do a female porn star's voice so well?! <BR/><BR/>I think this works for that category called "offbeat and quirky", and I say, write it.Robin S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/03258459688300851984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-2636834881925904572008-02-17T13:47:00.000-05:002008-02-17T13:47:00.000-05:00I can almost hear the breathlessness in her voice....I can almost hear the breathlessness in her voice. This is so entirely believable! Good stuff.rilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06988777482435230194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-31999995480532397162008-02-17T12:23:00.000-05:002008-02-17T12:23:00.000-05:00I'd bet that query would sell the book. It's so lo...I'd bet that query would sell the book. It's so lovably quirky.Dave Fragmentshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17985158361431606939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-65864998567876043932008-02-17T11:22:00.000-05:002008-02-17T11:22:00.000-05:00OMG, Pete. You've got quite a voice here. LOL!!!!!...OMG, Pete. You've got quite a voice here. LOL!!!!!!!!!!Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.com