tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post116967163382520233..comments2024-03-26T18:28:06.391-04:00Comments on Evil Editor: New Beginning 197Evil Editorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03879826770199639420noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1169763805073351542007-01-25T17:23:00.000-05:002007-01-25T17:23:00.000-05:00I don't think it sounds too old for a 14-yr-old. ...I don't think it sounds too old for a 14-yr-old. When I was ten, my dad had split, and Mom had to work full-time in a factory. On weekends, she could never find a babysitter, so I watched my 8- and 6-yr-old sibs. This included cooking for them (nothing fabulous, just boxed macaroni & cheese, frozen pizzas, etc.). So by seventeen, I was working nights after school to pay for my own apartment. Force self-sufficiency on young children, and they do mature quickly. <BR/><BR/>I'd definitely read more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1169761511633218442007-01-25T16:45:00.000-05:002007-01-25T16:45:00.000-05:00It does sound a little old for a 14 year old, but ...It does sound a little old for a 14 year old, but I like it. I'm curious and want to read more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1169750198472326232007-01-25T13:36:00.000-05:002007-01-25T13:36:00.000-05:00I've read this a half dozen times and it works as ...I've read this a half dozen times and it works as an opening. My only concern seems to be that it doesn't hit the youngsters voice, that maybe it sounds a little too old. <BR/>And that may just be me.Dave Fragmentshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17985158361431606939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1169738115542598892007-01-25T10:15:00.000-05:002007-01-25T10:15:00.000-05:00I agree with the above -- "raised by a pack of Sat...I agree with the above -- "raised by a pack of Saturday morning cartoons" is priceless! :D<BR/><BR/>Good beginning, good continuation.shaded-lilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14006767625596152527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1169735869501077722007-01-25T09:37:00.000-05:002007-01-25T09:37:00.000-05:00I love this, too. Good job, blogless troll!I love this, too. Good job, blogless troll!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1169730762052955422007-01-25T08:12:00.000-05:002007-01-25T08:12:00.000-05:00"My real mom and dad died in a plane crash when I ..."My real mom and dad died in a plane crash when I was six months old, and I was raised by a pack of Saturday morning cartoons."<BR/><BR/>One of the best opening sentences I seen on this blog.<BR/><BR/>I concur with whitemouse. This is great and I would read more. -V95Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1169696378574991112007-01-24T22:39:00.000-05:002007-01-24T22:39:00.000-05:00Okay, now that is a fantastic beginning. I am dyin...Okay, now <I>that</I> is a fantastic beginning. I am dying to know more. <BR/><BR/>"(R)aised by a pack of Saturday morning cartoons" is awesome. So is pretty much everything else here.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com