tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post114805375161692870..comments2024-03-26T18:28:06.391-04:00Comments on Evil Editor: Face-Lift 27Evil Editorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03879826770199639420noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1148310783660109432006-05-22T11:13:00.000-04:002006-05-22T11:13:00.000-04:00"And it's a catastrophe if the agent reading the q..."And it's a catastrophe if the agent reading the query letter is rolling her eyes halfway through."<BR/>Freudian slip?<BR/>jessica and I wonder.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1148088149234252272006-05-19T21:22:00.000-04:002006-05-19T21:22:00.000-04:00"Small for her age" reeks of "Barely Legal." Might..."Small for her age" reeks of "Barely Legal." Might work in the novel, but consider leaving it out of the synopsis. Unless you WANT to hint at porn, of course. It would keep me reading...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1148083496622715062006-05-19T20:04:00.000-04:002006-05-19T20:04:00.000-04:00KHANNNNNNNagon!!!!You made my day. :)As for the s...<I>KHANNNNNNNagon!!!!</I><BR/><BR/>You made my day. :)<BR/><BR/>As for the story: another "band of plucky adventurers, one of every cliche type, set out into the world with their charismatic leader to hunt down a powerful artifact that can save the day" story.<BR/><BR/>I'd also like to add that there's a reason that Mary Sue quizzes often query authors about their attachment to their characters. If you become too emotionally attached, you become inflexible with edits and have trouble giving any *real* flaws to the characters.Reihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17005292189176596201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1148083314775599902006-05-19T20:01:00.000-04:002006-05-19T20:01:00.000-04:00Yes, I'd like to see the revised version next to t...Yes, I'd like to see the revised version next to the original, as well.Brendahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17083327647412477394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1148079098539818202006-05-19T18:51:00.000-04:002006-05-19T18:51:00.000-04:00Can we see the revised version? Surely I'm not the...Can we see the revised version? Surely I'm not the only minion who would love to see some happy news.<BR/><BR/>(This is a question for the author, of course, not for Evil Editor.)Benja Fallensteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03783155664090619467noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1148077732536620202006-05-19T18:28:00.000-04:002006-05-19T18:28:00.000-04:00I have a question, EE. Why is it that whenever you...I have a question, EE. Why is it that whenever you talk about an agent, you use she or her? Just curious. Oh, and that's hillarious about the Kahn joke. I was thinking that exact same thing when I saw that name.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26791026.post-1148076301526903202006-05-19T18:05:00.000-04:002006-05-19T18:05:00.000-04:00Definition of impossible: keeping a straight face ...Definition of impossible: keeping a straight face when reading EE's blog, even while knowing that when it's YOUR query being publicly humiliated, it's not going to be anything like so damn funny.nonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00415222406280230021noreply@blogger.com